2019-07-25
Lots of action, light on details
The story is fast paced and creative but is more like a third draft. The author probably clearly pictures her characters but there is no description of anyone or any scene in this book. The main character has wings. Are they head to toe or short? Feathery or gossamer? How old is the protagonist or anyone else? What do they look like? Why is the kitchen on the second floor? Her boyfriends have hair, I presume, but is it long or short? All I know is hair and eye color and nothing else. So hard to get into this story.