Some of the worst, most awkward writing I've ever experienced. Terrible punctuation and syntax.

Grammar and spelling errors make this book hard to read. The book skips around and is hard to fallow. The sexual parts are poorly written and tacky. Good concept poorly executed.

The writing and dialog were very immature. Skimmed through most of the story and couldn't be bothered to finish.

Good story. Well written and edited. Easy to read in 2-3 hours.

Great book but the last pages are missing on iTunes :-(

The book was well created, the plot was intriguing, well developed and the romantic elements well balanced. A good, and refreshing read.

Awesome story! Need more!

This book had an okay story line and no real climaxes. Too many grammatical errors and misused and missing words...many times I found myself trying to fill in the blank. It makes you wonder how old the author is and how educated because of so many punctuation errors too.

The summary for the book was actually written better than the book itself. I had a hard time connecting with the characters and the plot. I didn't finish the book.

I really enjoyed it as a quick read. Something a little different from the normal contemporary romance but very passionate.

It was really good! It was very detailed and was an awesome story. Kind of like twilight if Bella would have gone with Jacob but subtract the vampires. Loved it!

This book was okay I didn't like the way it was written though. It almost seemed like it was written in a rush just to get the book done but that's just me

Love so much the story, is fun and lovely a true fairytale!

I thought this book was somewhat mediocre. The story line was not very complex and I found the main characters/dialogue a little annoying. Several typos and over-use of certain words was distracting.

I love this book they should have a part 2

Why would you stop the story right there!!!! I feel like it could have about 10 more books!!!!

I loved it from beginning to end, but was sad for the couple. I love the "Old Bear" took him awhile to fine his mate. They should've been able to have more kids.

I loved this story I couldn't put it down it only took me a couple hours to read I hope you make a second book!!!!!!!!!

Love it wish this was a series wld def read more like it

Read a in couple of hours. Very sweet romance.

The punctuation in this story drove me crazy. Overuse and misuse of !'s and misplaced ,'s broke up the flow of the story. I've never seen the word "whilst" used so often; it was irritating. The conversations were awkward and not realistic. This was a frustrating read, at best.

This was such a good book!! I wished it was longer

this is a great book! i love the sex parts in this book, very real and vivid.... it really should have been longger! but other than that, its a super book that i urge u to get

I loved the first person narrative. The wolves are different. There is a touch of other world, the feeling of reality bent true. The writing reminds me of a Charles d'lint. This is a good story.

I loved this book I just wish it was longer :( I didn't want the story to end!

Broding sexy male character! Man he was HOT! I loved the sex and the story!!

Awesome !!!!!!!:)

love it

I loved this book! It was romantic and sweet and really funny. It sucked that it was so short I seriously wished there was more to it. It's not a book for anyone under at least four teen.

The dialog was very forced and the grammar was a disaster. It was very frustrating to read.

It is a great book I just wish if it was a longer book

Nice story

I really loved the story!!!!!!!! I would love more!!!!!!!!

I generally love the free books and rate them generously for the free entertainment it provides. This story how ever was very difficult to read and keep my attention. I barely could make the first chapter and pretty much skimmed the rest of the book until the end.

The writer was definitely not letting the story flow. It was rushed and the characters were trying to hard. They were not likable and you couldn't relate.

This was the most poorly written mini novel I have ever read. If this is any indication of her other books, I would advise you not to waste your time or money. It is scattered and overly 'informative.' Since when do people need to be told that when their baby appears in the hands of the person helping them deliver him/her that those hands were between their legs in an entirely new sentence. She describes everything to death!! I literally wanted to get her a good editor or something. It is a mess.

Way to short but love it!

I wanted to like this book. The story idea, while not original, was interesting. I couldn't get over the way it was written though. I thought the dialogue sounded forced and unbelievable. And some of the vocabulary choices - example, whilst - just added to the fact that the dialogue didn't ring true. I ended up getting frustrated with the book and never finishing it.

More please

As a diabetic, I was very pleased to read about another diabetic, especially one that fit my description. lol It was very well written and I thoroughly enjoyed it. I only wish I has more.

I loved it I wish I could have hot sex with a werewolf like Flint even if I have a husband I don't care this book was sexy

Cute story, nice facts about Alaska and their indigenous

people.

This book was great. Very interesting 

Good but weak story base, needed a little more meat to it.

Started reading and couldn't stop! I wish there was more to read.

The storyline was well thought out but the characters needed more dimension. I dont like that jess is talking to the reader like a best friend. It wasnt like we were hearing her thoughts. Its just not a style I like. But the book was not plagued with typos like other free reads. It was an enjoyable read from a new author.

This was absolutely amazing! A must read!

This book did not download

This book is awesome I could not stop reading it I think everyone should read it

Surprisingly a good book.

I am amazed that this book has the rating it has. I couldn't finish it. Ugh... Speechless.

Poorly written with bad grammar and punctuation

I enjoyed reading this story. I won't say it was the best I've ever read, but I'll most certainly recommend it to anyone looking for a refreshing tale of love and acceptance of change. The characters are endearing, easy to love. It was easy to overlook the less than perfect editing in favor of what was going to happen next. ( no easy feat for someone who is in the middle of editing a novel) I hope the author will expand on this family's story.

Ok this book is dumb you only have to read what's its about for the sample and there's the book!! Doesn't have any true plot to it..... And its been done a tone of times before.... All in all not very good